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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Idle Eleven - Soccer Tycoon
Football Rising Star27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Soccer Tycoon”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Become the greatest player!”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 34 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 52 characters.
2,042 characters.
Enough substance
992 characters.
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.86 average.
15,780 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,432 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 9 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 29 days ago.
318 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed several bugs.”
5 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
457 MB.
Reasonable download size
238 MB.