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Lockdown Privacy: AdBlock VPN
TodiskLockdown Privacy: AdBlock VPN
CELESTIAN GOLDEN APPS
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
6/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “AdBlock VPN”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 132 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 52 characters.
2,565 characters.
Enough substance
1,189 characters.
30 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
4.29 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.18 average.
9,802 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
855 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 24 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 98 days ago.
436 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “1. Bug fixes and optimizations”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
90 MB.
Reasonable download size
113 MB.