Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Lockdown Privacy: AdBlock VPN
Rar SharpLockdown Privacy: AdBlock VPN
Secure Open VPN Browser Guard
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “AdBlock VPN”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Secure Open VPN Browser Guard”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 132 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 176 characters.
2,565 characters.
Enough substance
1,193 characters.
30 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.29 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.28 average.
9,802 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
65 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 24 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 466 days ago.
436 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “*Improved stability and bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
90 MB.
Reasonable download size
27 MB.