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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Ounass Luxury Shopping اُناس
Al Tayer Insignia LLC
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Beauty & Makeup”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Cosmetics, Makeup & Fragrance”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “makeup”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 596 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 187 characters.
3,960 characters.
Enough substance
1,637 characters.
19 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.43 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
1,725 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,013 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor enhancements and bugfixes.”
Release notes say something
129 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
172 MB.
Reasonable download size
112 MB.