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AirMirror - Remote Support
OSLink26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
6/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Remote Support”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Utilities”
Has a subtitle
“Secure remote desktop software”
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 172 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 150 characters.
1,799 characters.
Enough substance
1,798 characters.
16 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
2.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.15 average.
30 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
39 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 483 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 49 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and finetunes that improve stability and user experience.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed crashes in the iOS 13 system”
10 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
40 MB.
Reasonable download size
168 MB.