Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Omnipemf
Mind Monitor8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 288 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 57 characters.
1,120 characters.
Enough substance
1,112 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
2.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.19 average.
69 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
77 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 161 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 20 days ago.
Generic notes: “Updates for Statistics, UI improvements”
Release notes say something
213 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
21 languages.
68 MB.
Reasonable download size
9 MB.