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Lumen - Metabolic Coach7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Metabolic Coach”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 50 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 92 characters.
1,047 characters.
Enough substance
3,688 characters.
5 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 42 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.59 average.
3,937 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
6,541 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 120 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “What’s New: - Fresh UI: A sleek makeover. - Improved Stats: Trac…”
Release notes say something
101 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
90 MB.
Reasonable download size
270 MB.