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Halloween Color by Number Game
Paint.ly: Color by Number30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Color by Number”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Relax with Spooky Art”
Has a subtitle
“Happy Number Coloring Book”
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “number”.
First paragraph is 37 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 277 characters.
3,014 characters.
Enough substance
2,587 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.69 average.
25,099 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
148,739 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 58 days ago.
Generic notes: “Brand-new Halloween Update is here! Happy Halloween!”
Release notes say something
339 characters of release notes.
17 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
224 MB.
Reasonable download size
240 MB.