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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
HaloVPN: Fast Secure VPN Proxy
VPN - Proxy Master30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fast Secure VPN Proxy”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Proxy Master”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Unlimited VPN & WiFi Security”
Has a subtitle
“Unlimited Super VPN for iPhone”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
First paragraph is 49 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 268 characters.
2,331 characters.
Enough substance
3,713 characters.
21 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.66 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
15,431 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
79,227 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 36 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Better Security & Privacy - Faster Speeds - More Stable”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “[Fixes] • Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
18 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
55 MB.
Reasonable download size
26 MB.