Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gymboree
Caden Lane8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Baby goods & Kids goods”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 184 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 142 characters.
1,670 characters.
Enough substance
473 characters.
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.92 average.
11,107 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
12,453 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
154 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
214 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
109 MB.
Reasonable download size
54 MB.