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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gymboree
PatPat - Kids & Baby ClothingPatPat - Kids & Baby Clothing
Cute baby & kids clothes
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Kids & Baby Clothing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
“Cute baby & kids clothes”
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “baby”, “kids”.
First paragraph is 184 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 143 characters.
1,670 characters.
Enough substance
1,013 characters.
8 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.92 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
11,107 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
113,897 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 19 days ago.
154 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Performance improvements & bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
6 languages.
109 MB.
Reasonable download size
155 MB.