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2 Player Games - Pastimes
Daily Pastimes - Minigames25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Pastimes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Minigames”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fun and play for two people”
Has a subtitle
“Mini games for the family”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 388 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 325 characters.
2,715 characters.
Enough substance
2,709 characters.
24 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
25 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
16,598 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
20 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 255 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 55 days ago.
Generic notes: “Small bug corrections and app improvements”
Release notes say something
296 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
7 languages.
181 MB.
Reasonable download size
256 MB.