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2 Player Games - Pastimes
Pastimes: Recall What You DidPastimes: Recall What You Did
Remember the things you forget
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Pastimes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Recall What You Did”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fun and play for two people”
Has a subtitle
“Remember the things you forget”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 388 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 118 characters.
2,715 characters.
Enough substance
1,805 characters.
24 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.55 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
16,598 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 255 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 37 days ago.
Generic notes: “Small bug corrections and app improvements”
Release notes say something
499 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
181 MB.
Reasonable download size
5 MB.