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Fortelling - Story Writing
MyStory.today: Write a Book26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Story Writing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Write a Book”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Novel writer & book plotting”
Has a subtitle
“Novel Writing & Story Planner”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 131 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 139 characters.
1,464 characters.
Enough substance
3,299 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
29 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.49 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.48 average.
1,024 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,541 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 24 days ago.
766 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
124 characters of release notes.
16 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
117 MB.
Reasonable download size
15 MB.