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Fortelling - Story Writing
Novel writer & book plotting
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Story Writing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “idea to plot -”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Novel writer & book plotting”
Has a subtitle
“[ write novel, comic, script!]”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 131 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 45 characters.
1,464 characters.
Enough substance
1,645 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
22 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.49 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.37 average.
1,024 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
195 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 116 days ago.
766 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
109 characters of release notes.
16 languages.
Localised listing
24 languages.
117 MB.
Reasonable download size
193 MB.