Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Fortelling - Story Writing
Campfire – Write Your BookFortelling - Story Writing
AJP Digital Tools B.V.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Story Writing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Write Your Book”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 131 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 720 characters.
1,464 characters.
Enough substance
2,899 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.49 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.23 average.
1,024 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
162 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
766 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor bugfixes and QoL improvements.”
16 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
117 MB.
Reasonable download size
76 MB.