Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
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Direct Dual TeleChat Messenger
3/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Direct Telegram”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Social Networking”
Has a subtitle
“Direct Dual TeleChat Messenger”
17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “direct”, “telechat”.
First paragraph is 54 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 283 characters.
745 characters.
Enough substance
1,853 characters.
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 26 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.47 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.31 average.
19 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
125 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 67 days ago.
Generic notes: “优化话题相关功能以及性能。 优化相关界面。”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “minor bugs fixes”
2 languages.
Localised listing
4 languages.
181 MB.
Reasonable download size
59 MB.