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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Battlecruisers
Mech TD: Space War14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Space War”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Explosive Tactical 1v1 Duels”
Has a subtitle
“Strategy Survival: Alien Siege”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 193 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 6 characters.
1,711 characters.
Enough substance
2,161 characters.
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.42 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.57 average.
373 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
124 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
153 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “bug fix”
1 language.
Localised listing
13 languages.
812 MB.
Reasonable download size
326 MB.