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GolfCam: Golf Video EditorGolfCam: Golf Video Editor
Golf vlog w/ trace & scorecard
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Golf Video Editor”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Golf Shot Tracer & Golf GPS”
Has a subtitle
“Golf vlog w/ trace & scorecard”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “golf”.
First paragraph is 11 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 287 characters.
1,037 characters.
Enough substance
1,303 characters.
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
11,382 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
537 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 6 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Minor bugs”
33 languages.
Localised listing
4 languages.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
263 MB.