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Golf Tracer11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Golf Shot Tracer & Golf GPS”
Has a subtitle
“Best Golf Video Editor”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
22/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “golf”.
First paragraph is 11 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 261 characters.
1,037 characters.
Enough substance
1,295 characters.
11 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
11,382 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 6 days ago.
Generic notes: “General improvements and bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
398 characters of release notes.
33 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
106 MB.
Reasonable download size
245 MB.