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Head Tracker
SIM-Dashboard12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Dashboard”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Head Tracking with your iPhone”
Has a subtitle
“Utilities”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “head”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 272 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 117 characters.
2,635 characters.
Enough substance
2,258 characters.
16 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
47 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
2/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.21 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.63 average.
63 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
456 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 133 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 34 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
70 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
2 MB.
Reasonable download size
108 MB.