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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Scripts: Episode & Choices
Choices: Stories You PlayScripts: Episode & Choices
Games Hub Hong Kong Limited
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Episode & Choices”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Choose your drama story game”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “story”.
First paragraph is 59 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 103 characters.
3,977 characters.
Enough substance
1,578 characters.
14 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
22,826 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
198,766 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 25 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
126 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
389 characters of release notes.
19 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
283 MB.
Reasonable download size
182 MB.