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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
App VPN - Super Fast Unlimited
VPN Master Secure VPN proxyApp VPN - Super Fast Unlimited
Hotspot speed & wifi security
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Super Fast Unlimited”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Hotspot speed & wifi security”
Has a subtitle
“VPN Beaver — VPN for iPhone”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “vpn”.
First paragraph is 91 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 46 characters.
2,948 characters.
Enough substance
2,533 characters.
18 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
44 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.40 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
5,116 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10,243 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 77 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 961 days ago.
616 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fix Added new VPN countries and servers”
6 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
134 MB.
Reasonable download size
79 MB.