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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Whispers - Interactive Stories
Choices: Stories You PlayChoices: Stories You Play
Choose your drama story game
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Interactive Stories”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Stories You Play”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Make your Own Romance Choices”
Has a subtitle
“Choose your drama story game”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “story”.
First paragraph is 88 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 103 characters.
3,293 characters.
Enough substance
1,578 characters.
4 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.61 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.54 average.
40,613 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
198,766 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 56 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “New Stories Released!”
Release notes say something
389 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
218 MB.
Reasonable download size
182 MB.