Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Reveri: Relief in Minutes
Harmony Self Hypnosis & SleepHarmony Self Hypnosis & Sleep
Hypnotherapy for Weight Loss
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Relief in Minutes”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“When Nothing Else Works”
Has a subtitle
“Hypnotherapy for Weight Loss”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 250 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 323 characters.
3,625 characters.
Enough substance
3,943 characters.
15 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
27 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.80 average.
4,466 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4,024 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 5 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
355 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements to layout and flow.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
189 MB.
Reasonable download size
105 MB.