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Chicken Egg Tracker LoggingChicken Egg Tracker Logging
Track eggs and manage flocks
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Track eggs and manage flocks”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “eggs”.
First paragraph is 70 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 342 characters.
1,599 characters.
Enough substance
2,012 characters.
0 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 633 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 313 days ago.
294 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Added login with Apple Button”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
70 MB.
Reasonable download size
12 MB.