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Walking RPG: Hero health game
Fitness game for weight loss
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Make fitness fun!”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hero health game”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Run or walk to battle enemies”
Has a subtitle
“Fitness game for weight loss”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “run”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “game”.
First paragraph is 396 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 16 characters.
1,514 characters.
Enough substance
2,337 characters.
0 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.71 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
143 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,120 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 100 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 49 days ago.
Generic notes: “Improved stability in missions and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “This update contains stability improvements and general bug fixes.”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
272 MB.
Reasonable download size
229 MB.