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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Telechat - Direct Telegram
纸飞机Telechat - Direct Telegram
Direct Dual TeleChat Messenger
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
3/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Direct Telegram”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Direct Dual TeleChat Messenger”
Has a subtitle
“Social Networking”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “direct”, “telechat”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 283 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
1,853 characters.
Enough substance
745 characters.
11 bullet lines, 26 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.31 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.47 average.
125 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 67 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 25 days ago.
Generic notes: “minor bugs fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “优化话题相关功能以及性能。 优化相关界面。”
4 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
59 MB.
Reasonable download size
181 MB.