Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Office Puzzle
Gentle Timer: Visual CountdownGentle Timer: Visual Countdown
Cute, calm timer: focus & kids
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Visual Countdown”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shift focus back to patient”
Has a subtitle
“Cute, calm timer: focus & kids”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “timer”.
First paragraph is 483 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 227 characters.
483 characters.
Enough substance
1,014 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
3.46 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.58 average.
13 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
363 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “Required update after version 1.1.0”
Release notes say something
184 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
2 MB.
Reasonable download size
206 MB.