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FirstCry Arabia فيرستكراي
Firstcry Retail DWC LLC
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Kids Fashion”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Kids’ Fashion”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “kids”, “fashion”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 269 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 98 characters.
463 characters.
Enough substance
3,998 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.40 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
283 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,156 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 225 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
430 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
60 MB.
Reasonable download size
178 MB.