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Posture Pal - Improve & Alert
Straight Back, Neck & Shoulder
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Improve & Alert”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Better Health. Right Outside.”
Has a subtitle
“Straight Back, Neck & Shoulder”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 79 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 232 characters.
2,799 characters.
Enough substance
1,893 characters.
19 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.56 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
668 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
293 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 284 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
157 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved compatibility with new devices”
1 language.
Localised listing
24 languages.
31 MB.
Reasonable download size
85 MB.