Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
rumie- College Marketplace
GivePulserumie- College Marketplace
On-Campus Fashion & Furniture
Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only GivePulse
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “College Marketplace”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“On-Campus Fashion & Furniture”
Has a subtitle
“Community Engagement Platform”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 191 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 338 characters.
1,610 characters.
Enough substance
604 characters.
4 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.31 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.23 average.
124 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
35 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 472 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Added Instagram store link option, bug fixes, etc.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fix for a bug causing the app to crash in kiosk mode”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
53 MB.
Reasonable download size
61 MB.