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Junior Couture - Kids Fashion24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Kids Fashion”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Designer Fashion”
Has a subtitle
“Kids’ Fashion”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “designer”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “kids”, “fashion”.
First paragraph is 201 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 269 characters.
839 characters.
Enough substance
463 characters.
16 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
2.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.40 average.
5 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
283 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 33 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 225 days ago.
171 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
84 MB.
Reasonable download size
60 MB.