Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Offroad Car Driving Jeep Games
Bus Games: Coach Simulator 3DOffroad Car Driving Jeep Games
4x4 Truck Racing Simulator 3D
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Coach Simulator 3D”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“4x4 Truck Racing Simulator 3D”
Has a subtitle
“Learn Bus Parking In Bus Game”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “bus”, “game”.
First paragraph is 437 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
910 characters.
Enough substance
1,872 characters.
8 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.26 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.07 average.
1,764 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
411 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 102 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 77 days ago.
1835 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixes and Optimization”
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
469 MB.
Reasonable download size
276 MB.