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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
luna: teen health & period app
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Period tracker for teens
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “teen health & period app”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“expert advice & period tracker”
Has a subtitle
“Period tracker for teens”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “period”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “period”.
First paragraph is 66 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 27 characters.
2,924 characters.
Enough substance
3,644 characters.
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.53 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.79 average.
308 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19,090 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 188 days ago.
362 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes. Stay healthy & happy!”
1 language.
Localised listing
11 languages.
115 MB.
Reasonable download size
138 MB.