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Jeff Galloway Run Walk Run
Rally: Voice Notes on Race Day26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Voice Notes on Race Day”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Couch to 5K to Marathon”
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 445 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 30 characters.
3,965 characters.
Enough substance
1,113 characters.
21 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
1 iPad screenshots.
3.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.83 average.
200 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,286 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 44 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
359 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Race Day Performance and Improvements”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
322 MB.
Reasonable download size
55 MB.