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VJump - Video Editor, Effects27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Lenspal”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Video Editor, Effects”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 71 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
1,824 characters.
Enough substance
3,708 characters.
11 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.59 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.04 average.
403 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
70 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 7 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 291 days ago.
Generic notes: “- performance improvement”
Release notes say something
283 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
84 MB.
Reasonable download size
127 MB.