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ZenReader - Read ebooks easily4/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Read ebooks easily”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Utilities”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
9/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 23 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 21 characters.
1,307 characters.
Enough substance
671 characters.
18 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.25 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
369 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
Generic notes: “1. 修复已知问题; 2. 优化体验;”
Release notes say something
81 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
3 languages.
244 MB.
Reasonable download size
64 MB.