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Mineral - Gratitude Journal
Meditation Timer - Zenitizer27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Gratitude Journal”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Zenitizer”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Positive diary with reminders”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 140 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 46 characters.
1,991 characters.
Enough substance
3,057 characters.
4 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
23 bullet lines, 31 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.78 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
114 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
216 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 743 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 22 days ago.
202 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
1792 characters of release notes.
4 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
38 MB.
Reasonable download size
177 MB.