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Map My Run GPS Running Tracker
5K Runner: couch potato to 5KMap My Run GPS Running Tracker
5K 10K, Half Marathon Training
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “couch potato to 5K”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“5K 10K, Half Marathon Training”
Has a subtitle
“Couch potato to 5K: Run 5K”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “couch”, “potato”.
First paragraph is 68 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 49 characters.
3,817 characters.
Enough substance
3,820 characters.
26 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
34 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.84 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.90 average.
754,330 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
118,696 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 23 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 31 days ago.
270 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor updates & bug fixes.”
14 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
168 MB.
Reasonable download size
167 MB.