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Package Tracker - pkge Mobile3/30 characters. A brand this well known can afford a short title.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “pkge Mobile”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Ship, Track. Anytime, Anywhere”
Has a subtitle
“Delivery Track - Tracking App”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 211 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 159 characters.
228 characters.
Enough substance
3,965 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
2 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.58 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
1,182,825 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
19,374 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 23 days ago.
747 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed bugs”
19 languages.
Localised listing
3 languages.
186 MB.
Reasonable download size
83 MB.