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Harmony Self Hypnosis & Sleep
Hypnosis with Joseph CloughHypnosis with Joseph Clough
Sleep & Stress Hypnotherapy
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Hypnotherapy for Weight Loss”
Has a subtitle
“Sleep & Stress Hypnotherapy”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 323 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 53 characters.
3,943 characters.
Enough substance
3,548 characters.
27 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
15 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.80 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.69 average.
4,024 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,624 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements to layout and flow.”
Release notes say something
291 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
105 MB.
Reasonable download size
75 MB.