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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Corewell Health App
MyUofMHealth19/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Health & Fitness”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 184 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 101 characters.
2,101 characters.
Enough substance
1,190 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
1 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.48 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
4,893 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3,953 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 50 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
Generic notes: “Miscellaneous fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Miscellaneous fixes and improvements.”
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
182 MB.
Reasonable download size
166 MB.