Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Zombies, Run!
5K Runner: couch potato to 5K5K Runner: couch potato to 5K
Couch potato to 5K: Run 5K
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “couch potato to 5K”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Epic Running Adventures”
Has a subtitle
“Couch potato to 5K: Run 5K”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “couch”, “potato”.
First paragraph is 48 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 49 characters.
1,601 characters.
Enough substance
3,820 characters.
4 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
34 bullet lines, 23 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
2 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.90 average.
24,098 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
118,696 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 32 days ago.
Generic notes: “General fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Minor updates & bug fixes.”
5 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
204 MB.
Reasonable download size
167 MB.