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HMU - Make New Friends
Renz - Make New Friends22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Make New Friends”.
Contains filler: “new”.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Meet real people, find a bff”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 48 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 345 characters.
1,261 characters.
Enough substance
3,926 characters.
7 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
8 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.08 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
3,013 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,175 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 32 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 295 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
176 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
6 languages.
92 MB.
Reasonable download size
177 MB.