Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
HARNA: Workout & Fitness
RH: Weight Loss for Women 40+24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Workout & Fitness”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Weight Loss for Women 40+”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Get fit at home or gym”
Has a subtitle
“Pilates, Workouts & Meal Plans”
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 181 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 192 characters.
1,268 characters.
Enough substance
3,173 characters.
4 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.53 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.33 average.
25,319 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
9,531 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
96 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
9 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
350 MB.
Reasonable download size
117 MB.