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Sleep Sounds: Rain, Fan, Ocean
White Noise Machine & Timer
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Rain & Nature Sounds”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Rain, Fan, Ocean”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Create Your Own Cozy Ambiance”
Has a subtitle
“White Noise Machine & Timer”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “ambiance”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 65 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 45 characters.
1,884 characters.
Enough substance
2,141 characters.
31 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 21 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.69 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.65 average.
26 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
312 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 180 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 18 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes & Performance Improvements”
Release notes say something
516 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
157 MB.
Reasonable download size
97 MB.