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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Berry Factory Tycoon
Huckleberry: Baby TrackerHuckleberry: Baby Tracker
Baby Sleep & Nap Schedule App
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Baby Tracker”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Build your Berry Factory”
Has a subtitle
“Baby Sleep & Nap Schedule App”
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “berry”, “factory”.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “baby”.
First paragraph is 119 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 293 characters.
720 characters.
Enough substance
3,997 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
21 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.92 average.
4,489 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
74,237 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 189 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 2 days ago.
497 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Updated onboarding experience for users with infants”
6 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
315 MB.
Reasonable download size
226 MB.