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Berry Factory Tycoon
Berry Pet Health20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Build your Berry Factory”
Has a subtitle
“Love life, always”
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
17/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “berry”, “factory”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 119 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 310 characters.
720 characters.
Enough substance
675 characters.
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
1.00 average.
4,489 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 189 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 26 days ago.
497 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed some known issues.”
6 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
315 MB.
Reasonable download size
34 MB.