Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Space War”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Empire Battle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Strategy Survival: Alien Siege”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 6 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 87 characters.
2,161 characters.
Enough substance
2,296 characters.
9 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.57 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
124 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
817 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 152 days ago.
Generic notes: “bug fix”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “fixed a bug causing gems to go missing for some people.”
13 languages.
Localised listing
7 languages.
326 MB.
Reasonable download size
324 MB.